After having 6 lessons in PE class, I really improved on freestyle, resting backstroke and sidestroke. In freestyle, I was doing broken wing thing. I had to close my fingers together, I had to put my elbow high and I was bending my leg too much so I have to make strong kick from my hip. My breaststroke was really good but I only had to change is to close my fingers together. I have to put my fingers together because then I expend my energy to do, I can get most of arm pull from here. My finger should point buttom of the pool. I got nice strong elbow when I do brest stroke. For resting back strock, I improved a lot in this one. I had strong whip kick but I had to make starfish to be perfect. For sidestroke, I had to work very hard to make it improve. I was doing breaststroke kick and I had to do scissor kick and put my head down to my arm. Order to make improve more for next year, I could use these and it will help me to make me improve!Wednesday, September 14, 2011
What I Still Need to do to Improve My Swimming Skills
After having 6 lessons in PE class, I really improved on freestyle, resting backstroke and sidestroke. In freestyle, I was doing broken wing thing. I had to close my fingers together, I had to put my elbow high and I was bending my leg too much so I have to make strong kick from my hip. My breaststroke was really good but I only had to change is to close my fingers together. I have to put my fingers together because then I expend my energy to do, I can get most of arm pull from here. My finger should point buttom of the pool. I got nice strong elbow when I do brest stroke. For resting back strock, I improved a lot in this one. I had strong whip kick but I had to make starfish to be perfect. For sidestroke, I had to work very hard to make it improve. I was doing breaststroke kick and I had to do scissor kick and put my head down to my arm. Order to make improve more for next year, I could use these and it will help me to make me improve!
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Min Hyo,
ReplyDeleteYou win the $10,000! I was amazed at your swim blog, especially since you were the first one to complete it. Again, I am really impressed with the seriousness you are treating these writing assignments. It clearly shows me what you are learning in PE class and it's going to help you with the conventions of writing in English as well. Although there are several mistakes, I am more interested in your 'voice', so I am not grading these blogs. But, if you want more English practice, I could highlight incorrect bits and you could go back and edit them so your blogs are all good examples of correct English. Let me know if you want me to do that. I don't want to create extra work for you, but this is a good place for more practice.
Ms. Palko